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First Words

Our monthly publication - more than just news!

First Words Magazine features in-depth stories and news from around our campuses and our faith. It was created to acquaint newcomers and others with the purposes and principles of Unitarian Universalism through articles on campus events, interviews, and social justice witness, among others. Submissions are due the 20th of the month, and will appear in the next month's issue. Each article should be 500 words or less and will be edited for clarity, brevity, and style. First Words is not issued during the summer. 

Get Involved

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​First Words Deadline

20th of each month.
Every First Words story begins with someone putting forth an idea which then percolates at our monthly Marketing Action Group meeting, takes shape through research and interviews and is carefully completed through editing. We welcome and invite your participation in any part of this process. It is only through a diversity of perspectives that First Words can accurately reflect our beloved community. Suggest an article using the form below or get involved at a deeper level by getting in touch. Either way, we look forward to hearing from you! ~ Nancy Fisk and Jan Garbosky, Editors of First Words. 

Ideas, Announcements and Submissions

Do you have a story idea? Have you written an article that you think belongs in First Words? We'd like to hear from you! Send it in and we'll get back to you to follow up. 
    Please keep articles to no more than 500 words and know that we may need to edit it to fit. 
    Please keep your announcement to a maximum of 125 words.
    Max file size: 20MB
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Tips for Good Writing 
By First UU Member Anne Krueger.​
  1. Be sure every article includes the 5 Ws of journalism - who, what, when, where and why. If you’re writing about a speaker, explain that person’s credentials and background.
  2. Put your most important information in the first couple of sentences.Use the inverted pyramid. After the first paragraph, every subsequent paragraph amplifies and explains information already written, but in a descending order of importance. This allows the editors to safely cut the last paragraphs if space is tight.
  3. Your article should be written so it can be appreciated by newcomers as well as members of your group. Don’t use insider terms or abbreviations that won’t be understood by a casual reader.
  4. Write simply and plainly. If your material is readable - full of facts and unencumbered by subjectivity - it’s more likely to be read and remembered. And the more information is remembered, the more likely it will motivate people to act.
  5. Use neutral, objective language.Try to avoid using “we” or “us.” Some readers will feel excluded by that language, feeling like the group is an exclusive closed club.
  6. Avoid using “there” or “this.” Instead of saying, “There will be a meeting of the church council,” say “The church council will meet.”
  7. Always look for unnecessary words to remove, or a shorter way to convey your thought. Examples: instead of “Easter Sunday,” say “Easter”; instead of “in the event of,” say “if”; instead of “due to the fact that,” say “because.”
  8. Keep sentences and paragraphs short. Break up sentences if they’re getting too long. Paragraphs should be just two or three sentences. Keep them short to allow white space at the end of a paragraph - it’s easier on a reader’s eye.
  9. Try to use the active voice. The subject should be the actor (The ushers collected the offering) instead of the passive voice. (The offering was collected by the ushers.)

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2021
First Words - March 2021
​First Words - February 2021
First Words - January 2021
2020
First Words - December 2020
First Words - November 2020

​First Words - October 2020
First Words - September 2020
First Words - August 2020
First Words - June 2020
First Words - May 2020
First Words - March 2020
​First Words - February 2020
First Words - January 2020
For older editions please contact the Church office. ​

Who to contact

Kathleen Swift
Rose Riedel
Office Manager

(619) 398-4439
rose@firstuusandiego.org


Nancy Fisk
Nancy Fisk
First Words Editor

nfisk1@juno.com


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Hillcrest campus 4190 Front Street, San Diego, CA. 92103  |  South Bay campus 970 Broadway, Chula Vista, CA. 91911
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  • Home
  • Worship
    • Messages
    • Online Worship Services
    • Participate in a Service
    • Principles & Sources
    • Minister's Blog
  • Connections
    • Staying Connected
    • Welcome Newcomers! > >
      • Next Steps
      • UUism Primer
      • Become a Member
    • Community
    • Family Ministry > >
      • All Church Camp
    • Christian Study Group
    • Earth Centered Spirituality Circle
    • Meditation
    • Men's Fellowship > >
      • UUMF Renewal Registration
    • Neighborhood Groups
    • UU Women
    • Youth Programs
    • Young Adult & Campus Ministry
    • Affinity Groups
    • Wisdom Circles
  • Music
    • Adult Choirs
    • Children and Youth Choirs
    • Handbell Choirs
    • JUUL Tones
    • South Bay Music
    • Women's Choir
  • Education
    • Children's RE > >
      • Family Ministry Library
      • Children's RE Registration
    • Our Whole Lives (OWL)
    • Adult Faith Formation
    • SD Co-op Preschool
  • Programs
    • Archives
    • Art Guild
    • Caring
    • Food Pantry
    • Groups from A-Z
    • Larger UU Connections > >
      • Denominational Relations
      • Friends of De Benneville Pines
      • Philippines Partner Church
      • Transylvania Partner Church
      • UU Service Committee
    • Leadership Development
    • Looking Glass Theatre
    • Social Justice > >
      • Clean Elections
      • Climate Justice
      • Generosity Offerings
      • Organizing for Justice
      • Palestine-Israel Justice Group
      • Rainbow Action
      • Reproductive Justice
      • Sanctuary
      • SOLACE
      • UPTOWN Faith Community Services Center
    • Ushering
  • Giving
    • Donations
    • B&B Program > >
      • B&B Guest Registration
    • B&B Hosting > >
      • B&B Host Application
    • Dining for Dollars
    • Donate Your Vehicle
    • Donate Flowers
    • Planned Giving
    • Pledging
    • San Diego Visit
    • Specialty Sale
    • Shop and Support!
  • News
    • Blog
    • The Window - Weekly Bulletin
    • First Words Magazine
  • About
    • Member Areas > >
      • Members Portal
      • Board Portal
    • Calendar
    • Our Ministers
    • Our Staff
    • Ceremonies
    • Journey Toward Wholeness > >
      • BHM
    • Hillcrest Campus
    • Campus Maps
    • Facilities > >
      • Facilities Use Request Form
    • South Bay Campus
    • Forms
    • Reopening Team
    • Visioning The Future
    • Strategic Planning
    • Governance
    • Our History
  • Contact
    • Ministers and Staff
    • Website Update Form
    • Privacy and Terms